DarthDrac - Friend.
thoroughly enjoyed this story, particularly the interaction between the astartes and the eldar woman. You have a great way of phrasing things that effortlessly builds worlds in the mind's eye, and I really felt frawn into this. It's an excellent story throughout, though it felt a touch disjointed at the end, particularly when the Necron appeared. Surely there is more difference between a Necron and an iron man than the colour? Istvael's very easy destrcution of the Necron felt a bit rushed and too easy, and this section stands out for the most part because of how good the rest of it was.